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DIAL response: break repeated closer formulas and citation-stacking - #767

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  • User feedback: the prose read as mechanically generated. Every Results subsection (8/8) and 4 of 5 Discussion themes closed on the identical "Thus [Type] is [Category]: [epigram]" formula; several passages stacked citations in flat parenthetical-final lists; "coded for act" and "That is X" repeated as unvaried launchers throughout.
  • Built a drafting register from 9 same-issue 2027 IJHCS articles (including Belousov et al. itself) to calibrate against the actual target venue's prose patterns rather than guessing, confirmed their subsection closers vary constantly and never repeat a formula.
  • Rewrote every flagged passage: 12 closers now end differently from each other, 6 sentences that ended cold on a citation parenthesis now put the author in subject position, the Conclusion's six-citation paragraph is split and rebalanced, "coded for act" (5→0) and "That is X" (8→3, no longer clustered) are broken up.
  • Also reapplies the Discussion theme rebuild and literature-integration pass from earlier this session, after a save from outside this session corrupted the file's markdown structure (headers/tables/bold stripped) and introduced text-level garbling. That corrupted save was discarded, not built on.
  • (Replaces DIAL response: break repeated closer formulas and citation-stacking #766, which reported false conflicts from a squash-merge history divergence — this branch is built directly off contrib's current tip.)

Test plan

  • Zero remaining "Thus " sentence openers (grep-verified)
  • Zero remaining sentence-final citation parentheses (grep-verified)
  • Markdown structure (headers, tables, code fences, bold) intact (spot-checked)
  • Human read-aloud pass

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…ng in DIAL response prose

The user flagged the prose as reading mechanically generated: nearly every
Results subsection (8/8) and 4 of 5 Discussion themes closed on an identical
"Thus [Type] is [Category]: [epigram]" formula, several passages stacked
citations in flat parenthetical-final lists, and "coded for act" / "That is
X" launchers repeated as tics throughout.

Built a drafting register (registers/ijhcs/ in the draft skill, outside this
repo) from 9 same-issue 2027 IJHCS articles including Belousov et al. itself,
confirmed directly from their text that subsection closers vary constantly
and never repeat a formula, then rewrote every flagged passage: 12 closers
now end differently from each other, 6 sentences that ended cold on a
citation parenthesis now put the author in subject position instead, the
Conclusion's six-citation paragraph is split and rebalanced, and "coded for
act" (5 occurrences) and "That is X" (8 occurrences) are mostly varied away.

This also reapplies the corpus-reframe-era Discussion theme rebuild and
literature-integration pass from earlier this session (new Theme 3 on
programmable pleasure, self-as-node relocated to Theme 5, ~40 citations
woven into the prose, References list updated) after a save from outside
this session corrupted the file's markdown structure and introduced text-
level garbling; that corrupted save was discarded rather than built on.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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rogerSuperBuilderAlpha merged commit 0119418 into contrib Sep 22, 2026
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