Promote contrib to main: DIAL response prose-quality pass - #768
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…ng in DIAL response prose (#767) The user flagged the prose as reading mechanically generated: nearly every Results subsection (8/8) and 4 of 5 Discussion themes closed on an identical "Thus [Type] is [Category]: [epigram]" formula, several passages stacked citations in flat parenthetical-final lists, and "coded for act" / "That is X" launchers repeated as tics throughout. Built a drafting register (registers/ijhcs/ in the draft skill, outside this repo) from 9 same-issue 2027 IJHCS articles including Belousov et al. itself, confirmed directly from their text that subsection closers vary constantly and never repeat a formula, then rewrote every flagged passage: 12 closers now end differently from each other, 6 sentences that ended cold on a citation parenthesis now put the author in subject position instead, the Conclusion's six-citation paragraph is split and rebalanced, and "coded for act" (5 occurrences) and "That is X" (8 occurrences) are mostly varied away. This also reapplies the corpus-reframe-era Discussion theme rebuild and literature-integration pass from earlier this session (new Theme 3 on programmable pleasure, self-as-node relocated to Theme 5, ~40 citations woven into the prose, References list updated) after a save from outside this session corrupted the file's markdown structure and introduced text- level garbling; that corrupted save was discarded rather than built on. Co-authored-by: Claude Sonnet 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Promotes the merged contrib work to main: breaking the repeated "Thus X is Y" closer formula and citation-stacking flagged in the DIAL response draft's prose, from PR #767.
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